Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Retelling

Maui and the sun
Checked by sally


Once upon a time there were five brothers, the eldest brother was Maui.
One night when Maui was just about to eat the sun went down and Maui got so frustrated that he shouted so loud that his brothers ran to him and came from out of the dark dark night.
That night Maui got so angry that him and his brothers hid behind two big big rocks Maui said to his brothers when I say throw it now, throw them and the four brothers said what will we throw  though. You will throw hooks but what will we make the hooks out of .”Yous will make the hooks out of flax and one of our fishing hooks” said Maui.
So Maui's four brothers made the hooks out of flax and four of their old fishing hooks. So are you four ready, ready set now!
Maui and his four brothers throw the hooks and Maui said “pull pull “so they pulled and pulled. Maui beat the sun five times so Maui said go slower or we will be back. the sun said “please let me go ,can’t you see I’m nearly dead”.
So Maui said “let him go” so they let him go.The sun went slower so Maui and his brothers got to fish to eat and sleep. The day was longer.